Re: draft announcement, version 2.0

[chat garcia <chat@apcwomen.org>]

hi pi,

some quick corrections. otherwise i think it is ready to go. great work.

chat

>
>Last year AWORC organized the "Asian Women's Electronic Network Training
>Workshop" (WENT99) to train participants on basic website development tools
>and other Internet-based group communication (email, mailing lists,
>newsgroups, etc.) so that women's organizations may effectively use the
>new information and communication technology to exchange and disseminate 
>information on the five-year review of the BPFA (officially titled Women
>2000). 

please spell out BPFA, can't assume everyone knows what it is

[snip]

>Track 3: Basic Course in Database
>--------------------------------------------------
>
>Who should attend: library or resource center staff, would-be database
>developers, information providers working with databases.
>
>Prerequisites: some experience is using database and database management

some experience in using...
[snip]

>DATES
>
>The training workshop will run from June 19-21, and then June 23-25. A
symposium 
>on women and information and communication technology is scheduled on June
>22, 2000. 
>All participants are required to attend the symposium. 

I think the way it is put is confusing. why don't we have:

"...the workshop will be from June 19 - 25. A symposium on...."


>Participants should plan to be at the workshop location by the evening of
>June 18, and 
>plan to leave Seoul by June 26. 
>
>





Chat Garcia Ramilo
Project Manager
Association for Progressive Communication (APC)
Women's Programme

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