Re: draft announcement, version 2.0

[pi villanueva <pi@isiswomen.org>]

hi justina!

>
>My apologies for not writing in earlier. 
>

better late than never. 

>
>First bit looking good.
>
>In goals:
>
>>1.To train women's information providers in the use of group communication,
>>web development tools, and  databases to be able to provide meaningful
>>activities of their organizations, networks and localities. 
>
>"provide meaningful activities" - is there a word missing here?
>or maybe another phrase that implies effectiveness (meaningfulness?)
>through sustainable information activities. 

Missed that one. I think I meant:

1.To train women's information providers in the use of group communication,
web development tools, and databases to be able to provide effective
information 
and communication support to their organizations, networks and localities. 


>
>Track 1 description v good. 
>Track 2 description v good.
>Track 3 description makes me want to apply.
>

Just talk to Sarah, the database developer we are working with and who
Rhona and I will 
propose we invite to team went2000. she is currently working on our Library
Database, migrating it to 
GUI CDS/ISIS and porting it to Linux. she is very excited about helping out
in went2000. she is quite 
adept at both CDS/ISIS and mysql. 

but more about this when we move the discussion onto the coming trainers'
meeting this April.

>>Participants should plan to be at the workshop location by the evening of
>>June 18, and 
>>plan to leave Seoul by June 26. 
>
>The wording "leave Seoul by June 26" sounds quite harsh. Maybe "leave on
>June 26" reads better.
>Would you reiterate people remain for graduation, or are the above dates
>enough.. (It's abit sad when people leave prior to graduation.) 
>

Okay. Thanks.


>>To applying via WEB, fill up application form in
>>http://www.women.or.kr/~went2000/apply
>
>Nice one, SK!
>

yes, SK. It's very sharp. I wonder, if aworc members have responded to your
call to test the application form?

>--
>
>Altogether, Pi, and editors, a great announcement!
>

thanks for the cheering.


Pi

>
>-jc
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AWORC-TRAIN is the workspace of the Asian Women's Resource Exchange for
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and request for assistance to <owner-aworc-train@isiswomen.org>.
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